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Fallen Angel
Crawling in my forlorn appearance
I hide my soul behind these tattered wings
Tattered and broken as they are
Plucked of light, stained in tears and blood.

In quiet despair upon the cold earth
Smeared in dirt I crouch upon my weary knees
And clutched timidly between my fingers
Rests one last jewel of Hope.

A single unblemished plume plucked
From the silver light of dawn
A feathered ray of light from beyond
To illuminate the void that has me bound.

This precious barb of silk
Once lost as I was and forgotten
Blazes now to immerse me in radiant bliss
To wash away the pain, draw me from the abyss.

So now I fade away…
My tender flesh removed
My shattered wings released
My inner light unsheathed… escapes.

(c)2004 Joseph Palladino
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an angel who turned from the light now embraces it in death

The amazing photomanipulation [link] above is by :icondarksidegoddess: and she was more than kind enough to let me use it as a preview.



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~The14thMusician Mar 19, 2013  New member Hobbyist Writer
This is beautiful!
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~arcticwolf313 Mar 15, 2013  New member Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Amazing...
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:icondrowningdarkness0123:
omg this is awesome!!
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:iconfresh-t:
Eh... I guess this just isn't my kind of poetry. Doesn't really churn me in any way. No disrespect.
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:iconthe14thmusician:
~The14thMusician Mar 19, 2013  New member Hobbyist Writer
Excuse me? What's wrong with it, and what kind of poetry do you prefer?
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:iconfresh-t:
There's nothing wrong with it, it just isn't my taste. I'm a little lost in the plot and purpose. I guess I prefer narrative poetry rather than poetry that tries to paint a picture. Again, no offense to the writer.
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:iconthe14thmusician:
~The14thMusician Mar 19, 2013  New member Hobbyist Writer
Hm... thank you for your reply. Now I know what others like as well. Could you look at my gallery, and comment on which you prefer?
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:iconfresh-t:
Of course! It'll be my pleasure.
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