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Amor Perdido
Donde vaya el corazon,
Cuando la vida no tiene razon,
Cuando pierdas amor?


Mi estrella, todavia te siento en mi
Siento todo tu amor y tu luz
Pero ya te perdi

Y cada hora que te quiero mas
Me duele que no te puedo ver
Que no me quieres jamas

Y pienso de todos los momentos que tuvimos
Todas las horas que te tuve en mis brazos
Pero despasito, estos recuerdos de ti, me van

Ahora, no puedo sentir tus besos o ver tu cara
Aqui sentado solo, empiezo a llorar, sin nada
Sin recuerdo del amor que me salvo, de tu

Mi amor, mi estrella, tu eres mi vida, mi unica felicidad
Y sin ti, tengo ninguna razon que vivir
Y no te culpo si nunca me das otro oportunidad

Eso es la vida
Eso es amor



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Lost Love
Where does the heart go,
When life no longer makes sense,
When you lose love?


My star, I still feel you within me
I feel all your love and light
But I already lost you

And every hour that I want you more
It hurts that I cannot see you
That you never want me

And I think of all the moments we shared
All those hours I held you in my arms
But slowly, these memories of you, are leaving me

Now, I no longer can feel your kisses or see your face
Here sitting all alone, I begin to cry, with nothing
Without memory of the love that saved me, of you

My love, my star, you are my life, my only happiness
And without you, I have no reason to live
And I don’t blame you if you never give me another chance

That is life
That is love


(c)2004 Joseph Palladino
©2004-2009 ~jphnx22
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Submitted: July 10, 2004
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This is my first poem in spanish, a poem about love in the language of romance...

I dedicate this piece to limona for getting my 5000th pageview even though he declined a poem request.

To those who've known me for a while will see that this poem is yet another about my first love but I hope anyone who has ever lost there first love can identify with this piece. Enjoy!!!
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That is so true, and so beautiful. :+fav:

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ANGELA BURNHAM: Making waves in the ocean of life!!

Pets teach us two things: How to scratch people and it IS OKAY to pee anywhere you want.
Thankyou so much for the comment and the fav :hug:

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:sadangel:
Ahhh!!! Very nice and true!!! :D I really like this sympathetic poem and how it flows. Keep up the good work. It's kinda sad like the truth in it makes you want to cry for some reason. Very moving. I sound stupid....well keep up the good work.
Awwwwwwww I wish I could feel that way, ^^ I cant wait till I do, so true in other people minds though and very nicely put, awsome peace, and great dideciation and congrats!-Midori :orange:

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Enjoying the Spenders of Real Suger..:heart:
why would you want to feel that kind of pain?

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:sadangel:
Tú hablas el idioma de amor bien. Yo lo disfruté leyendo. Bien trabajo, una vez más! :)

^Hopefully, my grammar in that was correct. :P

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Why Not?
So Beautiful. Can`t find any other words that would be fit. Just amazingly beautiful.

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|[ |3aka ]|
muchas gracias :)

puedes ayudarme con los accentos?

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:sadangel:
you are too sweet, thankyou :glomp:

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:sadangel:
Wonderful doll! The spanish makes it even more beautiful than it is, which is hard, b/c it is quite beautiful already. I noticed just one spelling mistake. In the third line of the english, it'd be "lose" not "loose", you know, cuz "loose" is the opposite of tight and I don't think you meant that.
Wonderful poem!
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“Let the dream begin,
let your darker side give in
to the power of
the music that I write –
the power of
the music of the night…”


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